A hobby related song I wrote

funster's Avatar
Verse 1:
Up and down and all around
Like the waves of the ocean
Stroke of luck or cost a buck
It's a physical emotion

Pre-chorus:
Plaguing me, won't set me free
It's everything I want and need

Chorus 1:
If e'er my heart could sing
Find peace in anything
I search for just one thing
Will it ever come to me
My quest goes on and on
From sunset until dawn
Will I want who's holding me
Love is never free

Verse 2:
Every day I look ahead
Forget the past it's dead
Fresh start I'm planning my life
Until I see her smile

Pre-chorus 2:
Drawing me, will she set me free
She's everything I want and need

Chorus 2:
If e'er my heart could sing
Find peace in anything
I search for just one thing
Will it ever come to me
Is it love or is it wrong
Just a moment or too long
Will I want who's holding me
Could it be that love is free

Bridge:
I hear when you call my name
Is it love or just a game
Your touch fans passion's flame
Will you ever feel the same

Chorus 3:
If e'er my heart could sing
Finding love in what you bring
I search for just one thing
Will it ever come to me
Is it love or is it wrong
Just a moment or too long
Will I want who's holding me
What is love costing me

Tag:
What is love costing me
Love is never free
melannie_star's Avatar
Very talented you are..

I like it.. I read the first two lines not knowing what to expect.. but It drew me in and kept my attention . I can hear the music with your words.. I like it funster!

Thank you for sharing it with us!
Thanks for sharing your artistic abilities my friend. Looks like good material! I would normally advise you to make preparations to be "trolled". However, this community has been impressive as of late. You never know!
General Feuerbacher's Avatar
Nice work
WhoreMaster's Avatar
That's pretty good.
funster's Avatar
Thank you. Sometimes the hobby... well....
Writing sometimes helps me process.