What do you guys and gals think?

I just shot this new model and wanted to see what you boardies think about it? She is a model in the Midwest and requested some images to submit to magazines. I also used a filter to "cool" her off... LOL! I mean to make it blue... does the technique work? Any constructive feedback is welcomed. Thanks!

Night,
Peter

It would certainly be good enough for this business but something is missing...can't put my finger on it..I'm not "Feeling her" if that makes any sense, might be the eyes

Alright Peter... I WANT YOUR JOB!!!!

I get the early morning vibe from the photo due to the blue tones... I'm an eyes man and although they are very nice, they are not speaking to me as much, but that just may be the shadows... (or the fact that it's WAY EARLY morning at the moment).

She is cute... and if this was not a hobby shoot... hopefully she won't mind the early critique... if it was a hobby shoot... (thinking... "What did you say her name was again....? ) *grin*

Seriously though, from a "calm & cool" set, I get it, but I think that more color (lips, eyes, jade belly button ring) something would turn me on more...
That being said, I'd LOVE to see her posing like:
on some red statin sheets, standing in front of a vanity doing her lips, in a garder-belt pulling up a single stocking... something more. She just has that "dead vampire" look, very cute, but pale (colorless) and just laying there.... maybe that's what it is for me.

Like I said though, she IS very cute. Nice job!

Does she swallow? lol

Nice pic, Peter! The blue hue may cool her off, but not cooling any of the rest of us off.

One word: scrumptious!

Thanks for sharing! Does she know you are sharing this pic on a hooker board?

Nice Job - great eyes and the naval piercing puts it over the top for me.

Whynot42nite has some good ideas, I shall use one or two for my new photos.

Back to topic.......she's a very cute gal. Myself, I don't like the blue hue and would prefer to see something more natural. I think black/white pics are sexy too. She looks like she has great eyes, I would show those off.

She looks well rested,so early in the morning.Must have slept on a temper pedic.That would be a great ad picture for them.

If she's not providing it seems wrong to post her photo on this board. If her real life friends/relatives see it will it create the wrong impression? I suspect with some people it will.

Thread moved as this is not really a hobby topic, but an opinion topic. - fritz

a black and white with the eyes still colored or jewelry I think would pop as it looks like she has nice eyes but the blue does somewhat cast that out. She is a very lovely girl though and it's a good poise. Also since it looks like one of those trying to capture a "looked what I just woke up next to look", maybe some natural sunlight glistening in from the background.

It would certainly be good enough for this business but something is missing...can't put my finger on it..I'm not "Feeling her" if that makes any sense, might be the eyes Originally Posted by Dondo7

Look at all of the shadows in the picture. If they don't match in direction are taught to read aerial photography. A shadow in a picture can make the mountains disappear (Oh No, not here!) and the valleys look like mountains.

This picture just doesn't look right because the shadows at the head do not have the same lay (direction of light source) as the shadows at the top of the picture; i.e., it looks photoshopped with a different head from the body. But, some photographers use multiple light source with odd directions and some special effects I don't understand. I just tend to still look at the shadows on every picture I see. I know the war is over, and I should just get over it.

JR

I think her face should have been turned a little bit more towards the camera and I would have lain her hair out behind her some more

I'm not a photographer but I know what I like.

I like it.

I really like the pic, but yes I would have liked to see her hair laid out around her face.