first review post

i just wanted to ask if my post was ok..im new to this and i hope it is ok for my "newbi"status...sry if i didnt do a good job

Its was great! Only thing is when doing a review you need to put in some other contact info and links to ads/websites/etc. The other guys need a definitive way to reach the lady.
Just put in the links where you found her.

Other than that, Awesome!