OPINION'S: On the ad

I would like an honest opinion. If your in the hobby and you look at several ads daily and came across these 2 ads. Which one would you most likely send a PM and try to set up an appt with? Why??

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This week..M-F, hours vary, regularly avail 10-6-please p.m.for details.

Intro Nuru specials-$130/hr- become a VIP returning client,, and get an extra$20 off on your visit with a review.

Cue the "I'd go with whichever is cheaper" irrelevant comments...

The ads that work the best are the ones that start out "attention Knart shoppers"

Wait...is this a threAD?

The ads that work the best are the ones that start out "attention Knart shoppers" Originally Posted by BigLouie

I'll remember that!

While I'm not a guy, I'll still add that I don't prefer either, but if I had to pick ... I'd pick ad one. Ad two seems lazy, yet ad one seems too personal and even pretentious. In my humble opinion, it should be less about what he can do for you and more about what you can/will/do/offer him.

Where's the link to these two adds?Just like to see for myself what these girls look like. Especially the onewho only stays at 4star hotels.

Neither. Ads let me know a lady's availability and/or bring her to my attention. What convinces me to seek an appointment is her appearance, services provided, her skill at providing those services, her apparent attitude, etc. In other words, I do a lot of research before deciding to see a lady.

I do a lot of research before deciding to see a lady. Originally Posted by RoDunn

Ok, I can understand you doing the research. But half the hobbyist go by the spur-of-the-moment and don't research. In that case, If you saw "similar ads as these.....which would you likely chose?

But half the hobbyist go by the spur-of-the-moment and don't research. Originally Posted by Cyndi Lyn

Based on what?

^^^^^ This shit...

I do a lot of research so I don't make decisions based off of ads, but I do form initial impressions based upon them sometimes.

Of the two options Ad #1 is the most attractive simply because it looks like some effort was spent putting it together whereas Ad #2 looks hastily posted. The use of color also makes it stand out versus other ads I may be looking at.

Ad #1 gives more of an opportunity for you to show that you can articulate yourself well which does carry weight with a certain type of client. However, I'd be sure to spellcheck better than that example, use commas in the proper places, and use correct grammar and syntax. Otherwise that in itself is very telling and may have the opposite effect than you intend though it does show some effort which may count for something.

Also, being visual creatures by nature, men tend to appreciate embedded pictures in ads.

As always, my opinions are my own and are worth approximately what you paid for them.

Neither

Yup, they are both lacking....I also do a lot of research and as Spice mentioned, pics definitely need to be included....and some dirty talk imbedded in the ad about what a dirty slut your gonna be doesn't hurt either....it's more important for us (the guys) to know what your going to do for us if chosen.

SpiceItUp....I appreciate the time you took to share your opinion and why. As for the reason for my post, neither of these ads are from the Houston area. One is a friend of mine far North East and the other was just randomly picked but similar to what I use. The friend of mine I have known over 30 years and hates the fact that I give her advice to only help her succeed to finding better clientele. So, I appreciate the input.

To those of you that did not like either of the posts. What is the general rule of thumb of what is liked and not liked?

I do a lot of research so I don't make decisions based off of ads, but I do form initial impressions based upon them sometimes.

Of the two options Ad #1 is the most attractive simply because it looks like some effort was spent putting it together whereas Ad #2 looks hastily posted. The use of color also makes it stand out versus other ads I may be looking at.

Ad #1 gives more of an opportunity for you to show that you can articulate yourself well which does carry weight with a certain type of client. However, I'd be sure to spellcheck better than that example, use commas in the proper places, and use correct grammar and syntax. Otherwise that in itself is very telling and may have the opposite effect than you intend though it does show some effort which may count for something.

Also, being visual creatures by nature, men tend to appreciate embedded pictures in ads.

As always, my opinions are my own and are worth approximately what you paid for them. Originally Posted by SpiceItUp