Here's my take. Get a local phone number. Or at least put the number in there, instead of xxxxxxxxshay. On some cells, letters make it more difficult. Second, your profile says you are only available on Wednesdays? If that's 100% true, fine. Otherwise, I'd take it out. Then, I'd cut down on what you've written. Keep it simple. Finally, I can see where the lack of recent reviews could deter some guys. Me? I like that. I'm never interested in seeing a lady with constant recent reviews. It makes her look like a cattle caller.
Just my opinion.