New homies can't read the ROS without premiumn access and that isn't useful.The main points that are visible,especially the activities and a YES recommendation is all that matters.I don't care to read a porn serie of how he fucked some chick. Originally Posted by 1on1wrong. completely wrong. i agree that some reviewers seem to think they are writing a Penthouse forum story (for us old folks) in the ROS - but a LOT of helpful info is there which makes my decision for me.
Ya gotta admit, that the newbies always usually get ribbed for writing their 1st review if it is less than perfect to the other guys standards...Problem was, we don't know if he has a writing "style" because he LITERALLY wrote nothing. The "Rest Of Story" is COMPLETELY blank. I mean, write SOMETHING!!! Come on!
The way I see it, the review was good, he just omitted a few things that could have been written according to the guys responses on here.
He didn't know, and he therefore tried and did his best for the 1st time out of the box.
The more ladies he sees the better his writing style will become.
Don't take offense Nic. he was just getting a little ribbing by some of the longstanding board members.
One cannot get better if he /she cannot accept constructive criticism...
IJS
M.M. Originally Posted by Melissa Madyson
Writing style?? Really? I was unaware that submissions were going to be critiqued so harshly. Should I put a comma or is it that the place a semicolon goes. Ugh!!! This is a tad bit ridiculous that the discussion is taking place. Just write some bs in the ros to keep the pos happy.He wrote NOTHING. That is the criticism. And yes, the ROS is important to the review. Why in the hell even have "Premium Access" if not for that? Guy posts a lazy review like that, he should expect to get criticized. Newbie or not.
On a side note. Nicolet is stunningly beautiful. enthusiasticly adept at extracting every ounce of your sexual energy and exudes erotica with every movement Originally Posted by Hojo