Maybe it's the both of you who don't understand how men think. Not that I represent all men of course. Just the typical and simple ones. (That was difficult. Calling myself simple.)
e·voke əˈvōk/Submit
verb 1. bring or recall to the conscious mind.
If that IS the sentiment you are trying to present, then I would suggest looking at the camera. The door just opened. Did you hear it? Look at who is coming in. Even the first one on the floor does not suggest you are "waiting" for a visitor. You're rubbing your tits. You started without me.
That's why you need another, more experienced professional photographer. Doesn't even have to be a man. A dike. Is Annie Leibovits a muff diver, anyone? And normal is memorable. If you just so happen to look like this:
I haven't yet looked at your site. Still trolling along other forums.