Amy, personally I like you. But you must know grammar, punctuation, good writing skills and being well spoken are important whether you like it or not, and it's a must for someone that markets themselves on the internet, again, whether you like it or not. You're a pretty woman. Your weight loss is commendable for your health as well as your looks and chosen occupation. But consider this, looks lure the bee to the flower, but the presentation of the whole package is what closes the sale and seals the deal. Something to think about.Originally Posted by bustyamy
Besides, it's a fun question to ask. I supposed re-writing the statement is an option, but I want to convey a certain fuck you-ness, and I think that sentence structure says it best. Leading with a dependent clause always weakens the bite.
