looks good enough to me except make sure you use our review template. Not saying you didn't but the BCD/Comments/ROS info was out in the open; fixed now; and describe some of the activities in the Comments section
click on the link 'Sample Reviews' in my sig line as it will help you
Bankker66 why are you masking your link on the review? And why would you mislead anyone to believe you were linking the provider's showcase? I really would like to see what the answer to this is, now that your original question has been answered.