First review

I just wanted to check if i am on the right track for my first review. Kind input would suffice. J/K I have seen how guys play back and forth, very funny at times. AWW go ahead and cut me off at the knees! I can walk on stumps, just like the captian on Forest Gump!

Did you check these out before you started to write it?

http://www.eccie.net/showthread.php?t=20014