New HD Video: Feedback requested!

Hello Eccie Family,

So I just uploaded a new HD video to my website that I shot last week. I'd like to get your feedback on what you guys and gals think!

I shot this video for fun, during one of my still photo shoots. I wasn't planing to do a video I was just inspired to do it. So the lighting is very basic and there wasn't a real idea / concept behind it as it was very spontaneous. Feedback from a client perspective vs a provider perspective.

Please be KIND - I do like constructive critiques... Include specific feedback.

What did you like about it?
What do you think I could improve or change to make it a stronger video?
Did you like the soundtrack?
What did you think about the editing?

EDIT - removed direct link to video.

Please PM me for the link to this video.

Is it a or

Enjoy watching it! I know I did creating it.

Like the first one...sexy and awesome.

Liked them both. How do I meet Monica?? JK, very nice!

OOPS! I got in trouble for posting the direct link, so the powers that be asked if I'd repost with a modified linnk. Sorry mods!

If you wish to view the video please follow the link below and click on the first BW video on the page (girls embracing).

http://bcdstudios.com/p750423877

Please leave me feedback including:

1. If you ARE a client and a provider posted a video similar to this would it make you more likely or less likely to book an appointment? Do you wish providers had more videos incorporated into their marketing or just photos?

2. If you ARE a provider would you like a video like this to market your services to your clients? Would you prefer to have your face blurred or cropped out?

3. ANY constructive comments are appreciated. (Not just YES thats hot!)

Happy hunting + be safe!

Just saw the first one... kinda slow and sensual which is nice... the music loop was a little annoying, I kinda wanted the whole instrumental to play. If you know the song (and I do) it is a little distracting after the 3rd go around.

Also, i think the video felt a little too long. Like you could have gotten the same thing across in 30 - 45 sec of actual video. But, it is hard to put in only so much meat when you have such good clips to work with. Image quality is excellent though... so was the lighting.

2nd video... much better I think (monica). Some of the quibbles I had with the first video I couldn't say at all with the second. Length seemed appropriate... some of her motions seemed a little replicated and could have been removed (shy shoulder shrug with look up after was done a couple times at least).

also, I think a better booty shot could have been included.

Holy shit. Is monica in the hobby?

BOOOOOOOOYING

Great Job Man!

I'm getting ready to do a video with BCD and I have a question to go along with this.

What "tone" or theme would be interesting? I'm leaning towards limited nudity but other then that I'm torn. Personally I like things less mainstream and I want something fun. Suggestions for me or just BCD in general? Also, song choice? I want something more "peppy" and upbeat.

Mwah

I think some role playing would be awesome but I'm not sure if it's practical in a short video. For instance, there's a knock at the door, it opens, and there you are in a sexy cop outfit.

I'm getting ready to do a video with BCD and I have a question to go along with this.

What "tone" or theme would be interesting? I'm leaning towards limited nudity but other then that I'm torn. Personally I like things less mainstream and I want something fun. Suggestions for me or just BCD in general? Also, song choice? I want something more "peppy" and upbeat.

Mwah Originally Posted by Bristol

This is just my $.02, but don't try to make it overly dramatic. Above all, smile and be yourself. Fun and flirty with a touch of sexy. This is kind of out there, but what if it was kind of an interview with you showing some sexy leg and cleavage, with playful banter and answers to basic questions?

That would be different. It would allow viewers to hear your voice and get a sense of your personality, and you could always do the Sharon Stone leg cross thingy. LOL.

Again, just my $.02.

I like the fantasy role playing thing too, but I'd shoot you pulling up on a motorcycle in leather chaps (bottomless) and a low-cut vest showing lots of cleavage, and have a hot leggy chick on the back.

Like bad-girl bikers. LOL.

Or, a lady motorcycle cop who pulls over a hot chick in a sports car and makes her "work" to get out of a ticket.

Hello! Thank you for all the feedback above and in PM to me. It really helps out a lot! Editing video is very time consuming and hard to do without feedback and fresh eyes... it's a whole art in itself, just like shooting and recording sound. I am always learning something new each time I do one of these. That new video like I said was a spur of the moment thing while I was shooting stills of both beauties.

I promise much better lighting and an actual concept in my next video... with Bristol! Keep the ideas coming guys as I am sure one of you will hit a inspirational spot with her. Oh and I am now taking offers for my new photo assistant on her video shoot... who wants to volunteer? Job goes to the highest bidder, LOL!

Sorry, the job doesn't pay but the benefits are priceless!

Damn that girl in the first video with the rib tattoo is amazing. The videos are great, very well done.