poem's

Wrote this when I was 17 , that was the good ole days . Any way here it goes

there was a time In my life I needed you so much,
I lived for your smile and dreamed of your touch,
although my heart would melt at the sound of your voice,
when I looked into your eyes my soul would rejoice,
your smile made me happy and your tears made me Blue,
you said you cared about me and I thought it was true.
But Time came between us and that bent my smile,
I tried to smile but the pain stayed awhile.
Took lots of time but my heart started to mend,
I want you no longer not even as a friend.



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Wrote this when I was 17 , that was the good ole days . Any way here it goes

there was a time In my life I needed you so much,
I lived for your smile and dreamed of your touch,
although my heart would melt at the sound of your voice,
when I looked into your eyes my soul would rejoice,
your smile made me happy and your tears made me Blue,
you said you cared about me and I thought it was true.
But Time came between us and that bent my smile,
I tried to smile but the pain stayed awhile.
Took lots of time but my heart started to mend,
I want you no longer not even as a friend.
If you got one please post or if you have comment Originally Posted by dmaxskin

Good Morning Dmax,
I think that we've all felt the same way at some point in our lifetime. Well written!
Now I'll just say,
Here's to the bree'zez, that blow through the tree'zez, and
Lifts the girls dresses up past their knee'zez.
When we see'zez ,,,, we're gunna do what we plee'zez,
But we have to be careful, because of social diseases.